This is one of the earliest layouts of the original scripts, when the main shift happened from describing the scene to being the scene. Before, I would convey the information in panels and dialog, but there was a distance that was only bridged when I entered the space fully in my mind, and let every nuance be expressed. I came up with the method of "one action = one panel" showing one single thing in each panel makes a very immersive and clear story telling.

This was done under guidance of David Mazzucchelli in my senior year of 2005 in the School of Visual Arts, NY.