Fallujah
by Nick Bertozzi
Creator: The SVA Storytelling Workshop
Creator: The SVA Storytelling Workshop
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5 comments + 2 replies
Posted by: Tim Hamilton
11:46am / Jun 6, 2010
11:46am / Jun 6, 2010
This is a great workshop and a great (sad disturbing) but great story.
Posted by: Tim Hamilton
11:51am / Jun 6, 2010
11:51am / Jun 6, 2010
Although, just one little suggestion. Post bigger pages. That type is just a tad small to read on screen.
Posted by: NUB
10:55am / Jun 7, 2010
10:55am / Jun 7, 2010
Agreed. The type should be bigger from here on in. Thanks, Tim!
Posted by: David Bodek
03:46pm / Jun 7, 2010
03:46pm / Jun 7, 2010
That last page is going to be on my mind for a while. I can definitely feel the walls closing in on Sgt Bell.
Posted by: David Bodek
03:51pm / Jun 7, 2010
03:51pm / Jun 7, 2010
Oh, and I forgot to mention I loved the use of stream of consciousness narrative style being used in combination with the comic format. This story has me hooked.
09:49am / Jun 6, 2010