Thanks for the encouragement Lando!
I am writing the rest of the script so that it read better and so that I can perhaps post 4-5 pages a month rather than one a week. My story is hard to read as "one page per week."
I just read all of this in pretty much one sitting. I'd read the story in the Primer and knew to expect the wonderful art, but I didn't know what I was in for with the story...and each page is something new and strange and cool. As someone said somewhere else here, the balance of grounded reality and fantasy is a nice touch.
11:55pm / Dec 20, 2009
I'll be taking the holidays off and will return later in January of 2010.
Thanks for reading!