Posted by: Florence Hutner
11:52pm / Sep 17, 2013
Still amazing -- I vividly remember reading an early version at an MS 51 set-building session.

You asked for proof-reading -- do you still want possible "typos"?
Posted by: David G Klein
08:35am / Sep 18, 2013
Thanks so much. Absolutely!
Posted by: Florence Hutner
10:42pm / Sep 18, 2013
I'm blown away. I love your dramatic use of perspective and of black and white, and the story is even richer than I remember it those many years ago. I have a small list of possible corrections; where can I email them to you?